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PostSubject: first try at writing lyrics   Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:26 pm

Always was a music writer, never had a at writing lyrics.(not seriously anyway) the song is called "Remember me lover" its not gonna some stupid love ballad song as people would guess.

"Remember Me Lover"


I didn't want to feel like a slave to your mood swings
And I'm not saying anything I wouldn't say behind your back
And all this shit could have happened to anyone
All that matters now is how you gonna pick it up to throw it back

It's so hard to get along
I always know what you're gonna say
This too: I hated you
I wish you'd learn to keep your mouth shut

I never meant to start anything that I couldn't finish
Now I gotta be the one to turn away, it's time to react
I meant every word that I said, yeah I really did
But you gotta understand that I was sleeping then
So relax

I walked away, now remember me lover
I told you lies, now remember me lover
I took your money, remember me lover
I ruined your life, now remember me lover

It's so hard to get along
I always know what you're gonna say
This too: I hated you
I wish you'd learn to keep your mouth shut

I've been through this with you about a hundred times
Agree to disagree, start again, with our lives
Then every single morning I wake up and you're still there
But tomorrow you will be alone and that is all you deserve

I walked away, now remember me lover
I told you lies, now remember me lover
I took your money, remember me lover
I ruined your life, now remember me lover

It's so hard to get along
I always know what you're gonna say
This too: I hated you
I wish you'd learn to keep your mouth shut
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PostSubject: Re: first try at writing lyrics   Wed Nov 04, 2009 10:51 am

Wow... This is intense. Really really good though! I like it. It really captures the angst of a bad breakup. It would make a good therapy song
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PostSubject: Re: first try at writing lyrics   Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:34 pm

thank you! funny enough I broke up with my girlfreind a week ago...although I didnt think about it when I wrote the song
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PostSubject: Re: first try at writing lyrics   Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:18 pm

Wow. I hate breakups... I'm sorry =( but this is an excellent song =) sounds kinda like one I wrote a long time ago
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